My favorite photo is 4 because I think it does a great job of tricking the viewer. At first glance, this looks like a taxi limo. Great job using long exposure.
My favorites are 4 and 12. I think you did a really great job with slow shutter. I love the way number 12 is mysterious and unrecognizable. And number 4 is the epitome of extended seeing; the way the taxi is bent and blurred
My favorite photo is #4. I like how you used the slow shutter speeds. It looks like really cool how the taxi is elongated. It doesn't look too messy either. It looks ghostly enough, but also looks like the taxi should be that long.
Hey Dan, Overall I think the conception of your work was to depict a trip you have taken. Your images take place on the street and I like that. I am a CDEV major so I love these type photos because they often depict something I am learning about it whether it be design, social interaction or transportation. I think that you could have explored a little deeper in your city shots rather then shooting intuitively (as I could have myself). Also on some of your pano shots there is black space. An easy fix is just retake following the same path that the photo originated at. My favorite picture is number 12. You effectively used shutter speed to create an unknown image. What I like about is it allows the viewer to create their own space. I created an ocean.
My favorite photo was # 5 I like how was got to see all of the posters. The red in the posters really draw the eye to the right but because of the length of the photo my eyes keep wanting to wander the photo. You did a good job with the exposure photos especially the elongated taxi.
my favorite photo of the set would have to be #4 great use of long exposure it looks like the taxi in in the midst of a glitch transformation as it progresses down the street nice work
Number five is phenomenal. I like that you went out of your comfort zone to create these images. The only thing I'd recommend is maybe looking into a different app to create the panoramas, because the black blank areas detract from the rest of the image in most of your panoramas.
Also that house in number 7 looks oddly familiar...
I don't know if you had intentions of moving the panorama shots around, but to me, the black jagged edges really does accentuate some of your sets, particularly #7 & #8. My favorite is definitely #15. The color of the building brings out the entire photo.
My favorite is number 4. I like it because it used the panorama feature in a unique and creative way. The theme of your photos appears to be the city/ Temple campus. For organization/ flow, I feel like the photos could have been organized/ grouped in a more straight-forward way. I feel your photos stand out because they use the camera features in a unique and creative way (like 7, 8, 9, etc.)
#12 and #15 are my favorites. 12 drew me in because of all of the wild colors in it. That and the fact that I cant tell what it is. Also 15 is great because of the sense of motion with the panorama. Nice job
My two favorite shots of your photo set are photos 4 and 12! Photo 4 really captures the fast-pace of city life while photo 12 is much more abstract and makes the viewer question what they're looking at. I also love the colors of photo 12- it almost feels like you took a bunch of watercolors and swirled them around. Great job at capturing these shots!
My favorite photo is 4 because I think it does a great job of tricking the viewer. At first glance, this looks like a taxi limo. Great job using long exposure.
ReplyDeleteMy favorites are 4 and 12. I think you did a really great job with slow shutter. I love the way number 12 is mysterious and unrecognizable. And number 4 is the epitome of extended seeing; the way the taxi is bent and blurred
ReplyDeleteMy favorite photo is #4. I like how you used the slow shutter speeds. It looks like really cool how the taxi is elongated. It doesn't look too messy either. It looks ghostly enough, but also looks like the taxi should be that long.
ReplyDeleteHey Dan,
ReplyDeleteOverall I think the conception of your work was to depict a trip you have taken. Your images take place on the street and I like that. I am a CDEV major so I love these type photos because they often depict something I am learning about it whether it be design, social interaction or transportation. I think that you could have explored a little deeper in your city shots rather then shooting intuitively (as I could have myself). Also on some of your pano shots there is black space. An easy fix is just retake following the same path that the photo originated at. My favorite picture is number 12. You effectively used shutter speed to create an unknown image. What I like about is it allows the viewer to create their own space. I created an ocean.
My favorite photo was # 5 I like how was got to see all of the posters. The red in the posters really draw the eye to the right but because of the length of the photo my eyes keep wanting to wander the photo. You did a good job with the exposure photos especially the elongated taxi.
ReplyDeletemy favorite photo of the set would have to be #4 great use of long exposure it looks like the taxi in in the midst of a glitch transformation as it progresses down the street nice work
ReplyDeleteNumber five is phenomenal. I like that you went out of your comfort zone to create these images. The only thing I'd recommend is maybe looking into a different app to create the panoramas, because the black blank areas detract from the rest of the image in most of your panoramas.
ReplyDeleteAlso that house in number 7 looks oddly familiar...
I don't know if you had intentions of moving the panorama shots around, but to me, the black jagged edges really does accentuate some of your sets, particularly #7 & #8. My favorite is definitely #15. The color of the building brings out the entire photo.
ReplyDeleteMy favorite is number 4. I like it because it used the panorama feature in a unique and creative way. The theme of your photos appears to be the city/ Temple campus. For organization/ flow, I feel like the photos could have been organized/ grouped in a more straight-forward way. I feel your photos stand out because they use the camera features in a unique and creative way (like 7, 8, 9, etc.)
ReplyDeleteHey Dan,
ReplyDelete#12 and #15 are my favorites. 12 drew me in because of all of the wild colors in it. That and the fact that I cant tell what it is. Also 15 is great because of the sense of motion with the panorama. Nice job
My two favorite shots of your photo set are photos 4 and 12! Photo 4 really captures the fast-pace of city life while photo 12 is much more abstract and makes the viewer question what they're looking at. I also love the colors of photo 12- it almost feels like you took a bunch of watercolors and swirled them around. Great job at capturing these shots!
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